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[JL 8-bit] Orange

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This needs some serious editing, but I'm exhausted. Besides, this will give all of you guys a chance to put in some feedback. Let me know how I did, what to change, what to take out, what to add, etc. That way, I can make it a better song. Review!

And I already know that there are abrupt transitions, and the sections don't really fit well. Like I said, there is serious editing in order. But yeah, anything else would be awesome feedback. Break my heart.

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is this old or new cause i dont care i love it

I take that last review back

THIS is the best 8 bit sound ive heard in a while. it kind of makes me want to take a point off the last review and give it to this one XD

JohnLeprechaun responds:

Ha, glad you enjoyed it.

Great tune!

I love the fast melody :D You could use a better/harder 8-bit drum instrument/samples though :)

JohnLeprechaun responds:

Actually, I don't think I can. I'm limited to what FL Studio provides, and that's the heaviest 8-bit percussion I could find. Thanks for the review, though. Every little thing counts, you know.

Awesome.^^

I'm on a loss of words...
...i'm not a guy with great technique, so I do not know what to say to make this a constructive Rewiew ...
But your music makes me LOL
I enjoy it.
Congratulations dude.
X]

JohnLeprechaun responds:

Thanks again, my friend. I'm glad you liked it, and I'll probably have an even better version of it up when I get around to it.

Quite coull

Well its cool piece, although i found that a few minor glitches had slipped in:
The bends are god damn cheese, and unless they were ment to be that way i would shorten them. Also the pulse (or is it square?) is kinda flat, it would be better i youadded some depth to 'em.
for the scrap or sketch it's awesome!

Overall note: 7/10 4/5

and feel welcome to run through my 'kinda 8-bit but not really' mp3's

JohnLeprechaun responds:

I'll probably check it out. The slides were indeed meant to be kind of long, as a build up. I ended up not actually giving it anything to build up to, so I'm not sure why I left it. Like I said, feedback like that is really helpful, I'll most likely shorten them now.

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Mar 31, 2010
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1 min 18 sec

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