It was alright :)
I thought it was alright up until around 0:47. When that guitar loop came in, it sounded out of place in the track. Slightly out of tune I think...
Bass was a bit too loud and distorted in places. I would suggest turning down the volume or messing with the EQ of the track a bit. Turning down low-ends wouldn't hurt. :)
You used the loops well in the track but the real test for producers is melody-creating. Use a few VST plug-ins and create your own melodies. Getting your own melodies to fit in with the loops will be hard, but rewarding. :)
Keep up the producing though bud, nobody gets good overnight :)
I listened to it after not hearing it for some time, and i have no idea how that acoustic even sounded good lol, it really had no business being in the song at all. Check out my newest loop, i think i've gotten a little better. I'm doing smaller things and working my way up instead of trying to make a whole song in an hour and be pissed when it doesn't sound good.
It was very repetitive and the acoustic guitar had nothing to do in this song/loop.
The kick in the beginning was too distorted or whatever you call it. However I liked the asian-kinda-style melody, it was just too repeptitive.