tunnel visioned guitarist
The guitarists is amazingly good. But as much as I'd like to praise his guitar skills, criticism is worth more than praise. Unfortunately as with most musicians that focus and excel in one instrument, they have this problem where they get tunnel vision, and when they compose and produce a song the only thing they hear or work with is their favored instrument.
What we have here is a classic case of that. I mean the guitar part can carry this song, but it would be greatly improved if there had been more thought put into the other instruments there. Maybe a bit more syncopation.
Excellent guitar, but...
I agree that the drum kit needs to be louder. It gets losts midway through, and while
the guitar is the focus, the drums are just as important for the listener. 8 stars!
The Classical alike writing is a nice Idea and you're with no doubt a skillfull guitarplayer.
Sadly, you got a pretty small drumset there, which doesn't fit the "greatness" of the arrangement at all. Also the background stuff (choir, bells ect.) could be worked out more to keep the listener occupied.
Last but not least, you should get the rythm-guitar straight, sometimes is just not in time.
I hope you understand this as constructive criticism. Keep working on it :)
that was a sweet song! luvin the geetar solo!
You just mite be one of my favorite song makers!
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