this is awesome! good job! :D
great and und exposed
love the bass
melodys are incredible... beyond awesome
drums are great and unique
love the break beatish drums at 2:38
great sound fx
and the 3:19
that is the climatic peak
dont no wat that guy was talkin about
Thanks for the review man :)
Lots of good ideas
The bass, the melody line and the streams are good in themselves, but i've got the feeling that they don't quite fit together. I mean, the song is good, but it lacks this "thing" that makes you want to jump around. The*boom* in the middle of the song, with the distorted voice is very well placed on the contrary.
But your crash cymbal sound is far too present. IMO it should be more in the background.
And one last point, it seems to me that you tried to make dance that sounded like DnB (Dance and Bass ^^) and it could have been far better if you made the rythm lighter. This means (for me ) that maybe working with syncopes or speed up its tempo.
Anyway that was just my humble opinion. Keep working!
Thanks for all of the advice! :)
It's good but...
2 things that are just matter of opinion are I don't like the cymbal crash that you've used. It doesn't suit the song imo for some reason. Secondly, the phasing pattern is annoying for lack of a better critique lol.
Bonus points for bothering to create your own synths, I quite like the bass.
Finally, imo it doesn't quite have that climatic peak, it just doesn't quite seem finished to me. But its close =)
Thanks for the fair and constructive critism. I don't get a lot of that here on Newgrounds :P Anyway, thanks for the review!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.