It has potential...
But it didn't go anywhere. After about a minute of repetitive beats got me kind of bored. Add a bit more instruments, mix up the pace of the song, adds some bass, then it would be really great to listen to. I like the intro. But you just need to mix up the rest of the song. It gets kind of irritating. I'm sure you can fix this up and resubmit it just for me, eh? I love the melody, just add a bit more to it to get form of adrenaline moving in your listeners.
Because at least you tried, right? And it's good but it needs a bit of work.