Kinda good, if this is early in your music making
I'd say it's a good try, but it sort of drags on. It's kinda empty, too.
I like the idea, and this has potential for something good, but I'd definitely keep practicing.
Like I said, I like the idea it gives, and I like the sounds. It's just hard to get into. It's not something you'd leave on repeat for too long, you know?
I recommend cleaning up the drums and tightening the tempo. Adding some depth to the piano would be a good step, too. (Here "depth" might equal having a left hand going.) Everything else is pretty well put-together.
Keep making music! I'm sure you'll progress nicely as time goes on!
yeah i noticed that i forgot about depth...without it this song feel too emtpy....hmmm it seems i made it too fast...need to work on
Big thanks for a review!!
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