This is nice!
This is a good track, but there are a few things I would change.
1.) Increase tempo. I think this would add a little more life to the track.
2.) Louder kick.
Other than that, I think the song is good; it definitely has potential.
Keep it up!
Thanks, Actually im trying with some 404-type drums, and adding some more percussion as Paul Stetich said, it could bring the life you are talking about, hehe, and, yes, actually that track is at 138 BPM, maybe 140 BPM could be better (or incresing swing, n_n).
Thanks for you critic, n_n.
Yeah it's better than your last
But it still feels like a little something is missing. It's great that you at least mixed it up a little bit. And it's a lot better than just one note over and over again. I really don't know what it is. Perhaps it's the tensity.
In a way, anyway. You demonstrated great tensity buildup from around 1:58 to 2:46 but hen 2:47 hit I felt that all that buildup and suspension was wasted. It just wasn't too tense after that. You should've added much more to the drums at that point like a few cymbals and claps or something.
But granted, it was way better than the first one. You're getting there dude. Keep at it
Thanks Man, I didnt realized about that, maybe the missing part is another lead, or an upper melody or something more exciting, which is your advice? What kind of synths should i use in your opinion?, after all, did you like the track? hehe, thanks Man.