It's sort of a cutsey song. Nothing wrong with that, and the juxtaposition of the different feelings of the song with the more chaotic sound in the middle and then the sort of plinky, cute parts other places is interesing but it's all too shot. You've got to let your ideas and the sounds have time to develop so that the listener can really get the full flavor and when you change it up on them it's a surprise. I guess what I mean is that the song seems a bit too schizophrenic, too many ideas shoved into a small amount of time. Still, good start.
Dude, your songs are short, but very powerful.
People listen and download...
...but forget to vote.X[
C'mon guys learn how to vote, and support the music!
I tripped on this song...
This is definitely a great one, specially for a first one!
Keep it up.
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