Gave me a feeling

And I'm not sure I want to feel it but, hey, its familiar so, it's home.
First, thank you for not relying on samples or prefabbed shit, YOU come across much clearer. And because you come across, I can hear a bit a me, if ya dig. Seriously, you got choice words and I seem to run into those thoughts too frequently. Just... good shit, dude.
The melodies are pleasant, only that piano/guitar font could drop in volume or find its own channel in the stereo - it pulls me away from your voice. Your low-shelf singing in chorus sounds real good (even tho I cant make it out exactly - "ehyeeaaeeaah" love that sound.
Yes.

good

sounds like that one Benefit song

Killd it!

That chorus is chill, nice singing bro! Lyrics are great, I definitely feel these words!
"The lyrics aren't here cause I wrote them on paper, not the computer..." I write more freely and fluid with a pen and paper. F the keyboard, keep the creative juice flowing from brain to the smooth movements of the ball point!

This is a great track bro. DL and on the playlist. Im impressed by your constant elevation, keep this up!

All right

A good effort here. Really good being a first full serious song.

You're falling into the same trap a lot of people on NG are in with their beats (sometimes me included) - the drums need to be a fair bit bigger than the melodies. The levels there feel a bit off to me. But it's not horribly so.

This is quite deep man. Lyrically, I really like this. Really like that hook too. Great work with it. Your flow came off in one or two places, but for the most part - solid.

Keep up man

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I dunno what to say...downloaded