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Mar 24, 2010 | 6:22 PM EDT
File Info
5.7 MB
3 min 8 sec
4.07 / 5.00

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Rated 4.07 / 5 stars
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1,086 Plays | 62 Downloads
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Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Modern

Author Comments

A song about being indecisive and procrastinating and different perspectives on that.

This is the first serious song I ever recorded a chorus/hook for, and I think it sounds pretty good.
The beat is by me and there aren't any samples in it. Just drums and soundfonts.
The lyrics aren't here cause I wrote them on paper, not the computer...

Tell me what you think and give me suggestions.



Rated 5 / 5 stars

Gave me a feeling

And I'm not sure I want to feel it but, hey, its familiar so, it's home.
First, thank you for not relying on samples or prefabbed shit, YOU come across much clearer. And because you come across, I can hear a bit a me, if ya dig. Seriously, you got choice words and I seem to run into those thoughts too frequently. Just... good shit, dude.
The melodies are pleasant, only that piano/guitar font could drop in volume or find its own channel in the stereo - it pulls me away from your voice. Your low-shelf singing in chorus sounds real good (even tho I cant make it out exactly - "ehyeeaaeeaah" love that sound.

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B-RadGfromOV responds:

Thanks man. You're awesome.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


sounds like that one Benefit song

B-RadGfromOV responds:

I don't know what you're talking about but thanks.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Killd it!

That chorus is chill, nice singing bro! Lyrics are great, I definitely feel these words!
"The lyrics aren't here cause I wrote them on paper, not the computer..." I write more freely and fluid with a pen and paper. F the keyboard, keep the creative juice flowing from brain to the smooth movements of the ball point!

This is a great track bro. DL and on the playlist. Im impressed by your constant elevation, keep this up!

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B-RadGfromOV responds:

Thanks. That means a lot. It makes me feel better about it. I personally think this track is lacking, hence the content of the lyrics.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

All right

A good effort here. Really good being a first full serious song.

You're falling into the same trap a lot of people on NG are in with their beats (sometimes me included) - the drums need to be a fair bit bigger than the melodies. The levels there feel a bit off to me. But it's not horribly so.

This is quite deep man. Lyrically, I really like this. Really like that hook too. Great work with it. Your flow came off in one or two places, but for the most part - solid.

Keep up man

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B-RadGfromOV responds:

Yeah, I hear you on all points. I'm horrible at mastering, unfortunately. Thanks for reviewing.


Rated 5 / 5 stars


I dunno what to say...downloaded

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B-RadGfromOV responds:

I'm not sure if that's a good thing or not. I'm guessing good. Thanks I guess lol