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Uploaded
Mar 23, 2010 | 2:38 PM EDT
File Info
Song
4.1 MB
4 min 30 sec
Score
3.86 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 3.86 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
556 Plays | 26 Downloads
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Genres:
Easy Listening - Classical
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Author Comments

A piece that was thrown together very shortly after my last piece. On this one, I was trying to start out rather ominous and dark, but I wanted to finish with something very powerful. I used a lot of the same instruments as the last song.

All of this was done in GarageBand, instruments and all, which is a program under the Apple Inc. copyright.

Reviews


IIPhaseIIPhase

Rated 4 / 5 stars

I pretty much agree with

Jewelz...
You have a real good voice that reminds me of INXS>
Continue to get better.
Garage band is fine to start with but there are better programs.
The snare gets on the nerves.

Good job

8/10 4/5

Please return the favor on my new song: I wanna know ( dance mix )



Jewelz123Jewelz123

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Sounds cool

Sound pretty cool dude and the lyrics sound all right aswell, I do have some pointers for you:

- Mess around with note velocities/volumes to make them sound more realistic
- Vary up the melody/chord progression at some point to spicen it up and add some key shifts
- Back the snare roll up with a nice drum pattern
- Variety variety variety, add some different instruments as it does get rather repetitive!

Apart from that, nice work. If you want me to review some of your other stuff, lemme know =)


iband48 responds:

Thank you for the review, and honesty.

I always do find myself struggling internally when submitting something. I always know there is so much more that I can do, but I usually find that if I don't get an outside opinion first I just end up making it a big mess.

I've been playing around with stacking melodies a bit more lately, but thank you for pointing that out.

As for the number of instruments, I normally would have tried to expand on it a bit more, but for this song in particular whenever I started getting closer to a full orchestra sound, it lost of a bit of eerie quality that I liked so much.

Again, thank you for the time and honesty you've given.