I liked the voice
And the melody was very cheery too. 10/10
You need to use another bass sound
Work on the balance of all instruments.
Look at some tutorials on compression and limiting
The song is actually pretty good for what you are trying to aim for.
The technical side needs adressing There are plenty of tutorials on youtube watch them they will help you!!
Good effort 8/10 5/5
thanks for the adviss
thank you very much ;)