I made this song because folks said that I either put in too many themes or I didn't put in a theme- so I went back to the drawing board and came up with this... it has a theme that is not overused. I know the quality is NOT the best, but I can render a higher quality if needed later...

EDIT: Before voting, do the following:
-Listen to the whole song.
-Take into account the fact that I have only been actually composing for under two months and I don't even properly know how to play any instrument besides a trombone.
-Take into account that I have only been using the program I made this on for a day.

If you vote, I would be very pleased if you left a comment with your reasoning- I won't hate you if you give it a zero and explain why. I will hate you if you give it a zero and don't say anything...