I like it but that is me and i am not normal :)
Ok at its good you know that its not good, so here are alot of tips you are going to get. change the synths you need more string type sounds not the monatone sound you got, The verse is out of timeing, even the bass is out of timeing, plus you need a better sounding bass. 2 or 3 more synths one of them should be a pluck type sound to carry any type of extra melodey. Piano Robert miles is know for his piano verses and leads. Think about it try it out see what happens good luck.
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