I like it, but...
Origninality 10 because it was your own creation.
Diversity 6 because there wasn't more than two "parts" to your song...you need more.
Clarity 10 because there was no problems in the audio output.
Effort 10 because...um...yeah, 10. :)
Overall 7 because it was good, but some things I had trouble with.
It is a good song, but at the second part there is simply too much happening all at once. I heard that there are multiple lines going on, but you should figure out which ones or what parts of those lines are the important ones, otherwise its kind just a brick of sound. Also, you may want to consider adding an ending. Other than those two small things, great job!
Hey first of all thanks for writing a detailed review. The diversity deficet was due partly to a time constraint on my part. i'll be sure to adress those other issues in my next track. Cheers
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.