Hey, this is a song i sang, made the music and lyrics for.

Please tell me what you think through rating and reviewing.

Thanks

LYRICS:

The more i think of it i wanna
See you smile tonight
Don't wanna see you cry for us
Cuz i knew that you were always right
Now I cant believe
That you are gone
what do i have to do so i can
See you smile tonight
Don't wanna see you cry for us
Cuz i knew that you were always right
Now I cant believe
That you are gone
what do i have to do so i can

Repeats :P

EDIT: The vocal melody was taken from an old basshunter song. I did not believe when i was making this song that it was his because it came from memory and i thought that i had created it. It was so long ago and it was such a short song that i clearly overlooked it which i think is completely understandable.

If you wish not believe me than that is fine, but i created everything else including Lyrics, Synth Melody, Pretty much the whole song EXCEPT the vocal MELODY.

So i hope you can overlook that and look at my song for what it is and not a 'stolen' song.

I spent a lot of time and effort into it so :P

Thank you to Ioneofmany for clearing this up because i was not aware. I don't want to be running around saying this is my vocal melody.

So yes SOME credit should go to Basshunter for creating the vocal melody.

Thanks :D