Cool melody, but it seems a little plain.
At 0:34, I recommend adding something, such as a crash to make the whole beat flow through the empty space, to get to the next group of kicks, claps, etc.
I'll give you a 4/5, cause I'm not a fan of bombing, and cause of the cool melody, and an 8/10 for the effort.
Thanks for the input. This was just me dickin' around with various synths, so I'll probably go back and edit it a couple more times. Thanks again