I expected a drop at the beginning...

It has potential...

I know you hear this a lot, but you seem to be shallowly floating around the area that you wanted this to 'hit'. I see you have the elements but the song needs more bass and solid in the background my needs to feel slight vibration instead of being bashed around by your beats. One other things, YOU NEED TO MAKE SURE UR SONG DOES NOT GO SLIGHTLY OFF BEAT! It tends to do that around 2:30~2:35 and that's not the only time that happens... Please consider remaking this, I see that you have the talent, just get someone else to criticize it before you post it on NewGrounds, other people are good sources. -Casp