Here on newgrounds, people are looking for something that slams them into paying attention. Even though there isn't that much 'energy,' that doesn't prevent this from being a great composition. I like the chiming guitar, but I would slightly change the volumes of the separate notes a little to make it sound a little more realistic and a little less 'MIDI.' Good luck in the future!
Ok you got my 10 look you're getting there!
First thing I know this song needs some drums but pleased in the correct sequence so listen carefully.
At 0:16 a drum bang at 0:23 start a march pattern with the drum. Stop the pattern with the piano. When the piano stops the drum stops. Stop the march pattern at 1:00. At 1:03 a bang 1:06 a bang 1:10 a bang at 2:17 bring the march drum pattern back in.3:09 fade out the drum pattern and have an one octave lower of the piano same notes enthusing a climax.
Well that's is that should help push your song.
I see my advise is helping your songs and people seem to like your songs more. That's good.