Although the song seems to be in balance I feel the lead is way to over powering for my taste. I'm talking about the guitar. Everything in the song seems fine but like I've said the guitar is to powerful. Maybe bring the levels down on it or bring everything ells up. Ether way if you wanted a hallow feeling fine if not I don't know... Or I think that's a piano? Anyway I just got a good idea at 4:36 try and add a church piano, same notes you octave lower. Just so you can give it some deep harmony. Keep the instrument in the song till the end apart from that a sold song.
Emotional and very ambient! 9/10 5/5
Please return the favor on my new song Cheater ;)