Repetitive bass...
Which basically screwed up what could have been a great song. Its small loop got immensely annoying quickly. When it did finally disappear it jsut suddenly disappeared, and then just appeared again.
The bass also served to completely block out any synths that could have been playing some awesome melody at the foreground, heck it even obscured the drums :S Pity it didnt stay out when it did go out really, the main synths had one heck of a main melody going.
As for the voice, its quite good, lyrics actually make sense and have a great sense of rhytm to them, remaining in sync with the music. They could have been slightly louder though....
Overall, not a bad track, and with more work it could become much better...
Darklight17
=Review Request Club=
P.S. Dont worry about the zero bombing, it happens to everyone. They really should make it that you can only give a low score if you review....