Amazing 1:08 until the drums come in. Try a rock set tell me what you think about that does it work any good? You need to add at 3:00 to help that build up. If feels like it stays in the same place. Work on a climax for the song. Fade out at 1:52 to sudden. Harmony guitar at 2:23 same notes one octave higher.
Good advice thanks! I still have a lot to learn :)
This is really very nice.
This sounds pretty cool, and has a good feel to it. Decent choice in sounds, but one of the more interesting aspects is how it shifts across styles as the song progresses. You managed to segue them into each other quite well.
You have put some good stuff on the site lately. Keep up the good work.