A softer kick would of been nice... a break beat perhaps?
And what were you doing with the tempo? Everything seems out of place
It is good but too ambient. it clutters what is in the song in terms of other instruments.
I would change the kicks and have them coming in where we expect them.
It is nice to experiment but it is very hard to go against the laws of a genre it seldom succeeds even with the real professionals....
I give it 8/10 and 4/4 because of the originality and the thinking outside of the box/
Please return the favor on my new song?
A man hides his tears
so ...no bad .but something missed ...i like firsts seconds of sound!!!! from 1 to 40 ¡=))))) i will try it in my remix ...thanks!!!