Well i dont know why its got such a low score, this has some potential. But you need to actually finish it first :P there are still somethings that could be improved upon, like the build up and sudden changes. Ease the listener into a change and your all good =] Re-work it (Y) and you'll have to something to be proud of
Elements from industrial, dubstep, and some trance. Nice mix man. Im diggin. Def unique.