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Mar 12, 2010 | 9:25 PM EST
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7.7 MB
4 min 13 sec
4.22 / 5.00

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Rated 4.22 / 5 stars
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Metal, Rock - Heavy Metal

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Here is a new song i have been working on for a while, this time its all real... except the drums, though they would have been if we didn't rent out the top of my damn house. any way, i used ableton live 8.1 to do the recordings, took a while to learn the program but i got it now.

hope you all enjoy.

And ya, this song isn't about me lol, I'm not a crazy person, or a lyricist. just wrote a short story i guess. And before u ask why he did it to survive when he ended up killing him self, he is a crazy person and he felt he was surviving everything that comes with killing some one... like jail and the guilt and stuff.


There's so much wrong in my world
How can i focus on anything
We're trapped here, and there's no escape
Something is going to have to change.

I wished, for another way, to bring salvation.
But i was to guilty.... Greedy.

I have become the victim of my own foul play
And now theres nothing for me to fight for, its all gone.
Take my own life after i throw yours away, you'll be dead to every one.
A suicide pact I've made for use both, against your will.

My threat has turned into a promise
I've taken a life away, what have i done
And now its time for me

Inhale my last breath saver every moment I have left
One thing before i die, did what I to to survive
I have remorse, I will not lie, so I'll see you in hell, goodbye.

I wished, for another way, to bring salvation.



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Very nice

Hey dude, this is sick!
Reminds me of a polished Cannibal Corpse, haha

The start was well done with good harmony and the vocals fitted perfectly. Just the bass sounded a BIT out of time.

and 1:33 when it gets heavy it sounds VERY good. You should of distorted the bass too. It's coming on a little too strong and making the song sound less brutal.

So yeah i give you a 9/10 and 5/5.
Just record with real drums next time and probably put up lyrics.

Dnman responds:

good advice is always welcome, i never thought about distorting the bass, i think ill try it out. thx for giving it a listen. ill put those lyrics on, i just didnt cause there nothing special