build on it, bro :P
nice chord progression start, but it might help if you made it just a bit shorter, or added a bit more to it before the sudden stop.
the solo is pretty cool! I must say that much! you used the motive well and transitioned the chord progression pretty well. I just feel like this song is more of a solo section to some song than an actual song, u know?
the piano...lol, a bit fast? i'm guessing that you didn't play that xD anywaays, it's a little plucky and fast for a style like this one.
you've got a really nice idea here, but you gotta add some more stuff to it before you call it a song. if you ever listen to some jazz, or blues, you'll get a feel to where the solos fit in and how to transition to other parts of the song. pretty good solo's though! 3/5 7/10
Oh yeah! Like the majority of my stuff, I make a demo sorda lol... I plan on shortening the intro, adding lyrics, recording on an "Actual Piano"... Alot needs to be done, consider this my "Frame Work" lol. The Piano makes me laugh xD I needed it there so I'd no what to actually play... but it sounds a little... Robotronic... xD Anyways thanks man!!