I ahve to agree with Therm0
There are times when the song just abruptly speeds up then goes back to how it was. (hate to be a broken record but pretty repetative). like I listened to it twice so much to the point that I had to look and see if if it had actually restarted. could have been better if you would have just made it like 1 min.
You need to edit your live performances
It's great, at the beginning. Then it's the same synth over and over, with quiet drums in the background. Not to mention, your live playing is offbeat. You need to go back and fix your notes, bud. It seems to end abruptly and there's really nothing I can say I like about this song.
I'm sorry theres nothing you can think to say good. :( maybe try some of my other works if you didn't like this one.
Anyway, I did the same sytnh over and over for a reason, and i do diffrent stacks on it alot, but I didn't really want alot of instrument changes. I did it as to like a theme of something, what im not sure, proly a field or space or something of some area, im not sure.
However, I'm pretty sure it's not off beat since, well when i was making this song, I litrally put noes on the beat, most of this wasn't even live. Some of the smaller effects were live, but most of those are consant or fade in with no beat.
Also, whats wrong with quiet drums? they weren't very important except for the intro they just kept the beat moving. If a song isn't about the drums, im not going to bring them out.
So while I disagree with the majority of your opinions, I thank you for your review.
Dreaming While Awake
Just something I thought of randomly while listening to it. It does have sort of a dreamlike tone, doesn't it?
I like to think of it as such.
I'm not sure about that name though, it's better then some others i've heard.
This song reminded me of "Moskau" which was made in Soviet Russia so what about "Escape from Russia"?
As for the song itself I like it. It has a good feel to it but seems to remain similar throughout (which may make it good for a game).
I love that song lol. And escape from russia is a definite maybe....
Also, my end goal is to create music for games, so hopefully more people agree with you.