um yeah spice it up a bit
There was a bit of a confused beat, The beginning was good.
But around 11-13 secs it sounds a bit like a mistake.
Maybe give it a bit more depth
i have a guitar part that isn't heard very well. i have to fix that, i submitted it before but the guitar overpowerd the whole song so i tuned it down and now it unheard. i'm going to refix this again
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