The drum levels I would have put more in the bg. I did not like the transition at 01:50-02:15 it felt like it kind off took away from that scary negative feeling you would hear at some sort of murder scene. I would also try to put the voices loader they can hardly be made out. Very dark and very intense. I also like the fact that you made a more happy tone at the end with that church piano or what ever it was I really like that sound. Do you mind if I use part of this song later on for this attempted murder very violent film scene? I just got to that part of the script and I already see it works perfectly to build up tension. By the way I liked to first 2 mints of the song very dark at that point. I would just tweak the levels a little on the things I mentioned but if you do that 10/10 strait up. Actually can you upload a version of the song like that just so I see if that works better? Keep this one up as it's the original. Very good work film score material. Keep it up and by the way tell me when you upload something I want to review very good man.
sure, you can use it. I'll try to fix it up asap, but I have so many ideas it might take a while... sorry, about the voices being too quiet, I was trying to be subtle...
I'll tell you when the fixed version is up
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.