The sounds are a bit loud compared
to the drumms and percussions.
Try and balance it out a bit more.
It is a good start for a composition. Balancing the song in volume levels will make it better.
Please return the favor on my new song:
Skin Candles Satin & Icecubes It's EXPLICIT IN SOUNDS
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.