I have to agree
First of all this is like my first audio review. So take it for what it's worth or not worth.
ANyways the song sounds strangely like an epic solo. But you definetly could make this a song with words in it. Also I agree with the below review in that it sounds like a jam. And like something out of Punk-o-matic.
Other than that. Pretty good
Work on it
Add a bit more depth to it. Strengthen the bass and make it feel more like a song then just a jam.
Other then that. It's fairly good. Your recording is amazing.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.