It's not bad
Your start really brings you in a little. And after that, it really raises as if getting you ready for something, but it stays low. I think it's a pretty good bit with a ton of potential (I hear that guitar in the back, and I think it could be an amazing lead), I feel with more feedback and practice you can really pull off something amazing.
It is a theme that grows on you. Sorta reminds me of Phantasy Star Universe a bit. And the Guitar in the back is a really nice touch (although you really have to listen to hear it). I really see some potential here. The Abrupt and creepy end which pulls to a loop was really nice. Keep this stuff up, you could really show off a really unique style!
You aren't getting many reviews probably because you haven't made a name for yourself, try to put out a few more tracks and get people to notice you. After that, they'll probably take a look at other things you've put out and you'll get the feedback you need (Even PorygonX had a start).
Try to put the Build-up this song gave to some use. It's perfect for a suspensful theme!
I'm not the biggest fan of trace, but I think it's okay.
And you are the first to comment... ever. Thanks I appreciate it. ^^