Rick Rolled NG Style :P
Well heres what I'll do because to be honest you shouldnt have submitted this yet. Im only gonna review the parts up til when the music stops.
This is, as you said, pretty slow for trance. But, all is taken into consideration that its a remix. However Its quite possibly to turn the speed up without messing with the pitch, just use audacity or something.
But yeah, based on what you have, it sounds pretty good. Things it needs:
Production/Mixing on the vocals to make it seem more trance (vocoder, autotune, etc) (if you have these). SOMETHING to set the vocals INTO the song, not ontop of it.
But yeah the bassline is cool, and the drums are your typical electronica.
Based on the music parts with vocals 7.5/10 (rounded to 8/10)
Mind if you review my new song N'Thisisex man? Chicago House.
Wow thanks for giving me a straight forward review rather than flaming or bashing me haha.
yeah as i put in the description this is my first song with vocals that im messing with so the whole vocoder stuff is new/ weird to me haha, but im adjusting and trying new things.
and ill try speeding it up with audacity! thanks for that tip.