alright so...

over all the basis of the song was good. but what kept me from enjoying it as much was lack of foundation and complexity. you need some bass in there man, also some chord structure would be nice. one thing that bothered me about this song was the asymmetrical drum that came in and played throughout the song. some people like it just it's just not my thing. now, I did enjoy the overall tune of the song but do a little more with it, it's a bit too repetitive. otherwise not too bad man, keep improving and you'll be making great music in no time.