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hopes you like it. tell me what to do better. please comment

Reviews


Hmm, workable, but not really great...

Well, you wanted constructive criticism, so I'll try my hand at it:

The intro sounded strange b/c I think you were using open hats. Maybe stick with closed hats when doing a 16th note roll for an intro?

The underlying bass had a typical chord progression, and it was fine... until 0:26 came along. The lead is in a different key. The first notes were right, but that second harmonic is not in key; it's also out of beat at one section (I think).

So, in the end.... try working up some better harmonies/chords. The layering is fine since it's at a decent pace, but the lead is what kinda messes it up. If you're going for a quick 1-minute theme, then I'd suggest that be the only thing I'd realy suggest remastering.


onewheeleddj responds:

thanks for the info

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Credits & Info


Listens
497
Downloads
40
Votes
18
Score
4.10 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 28, 2010
6:57 PM EST
Genre
Techno
File Info
Song
2.6 MB
1 min 8 sec

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