its not too bad except i think you can do a little more to the song besides repeating it. this is in no way to offend but someone listening can grow bored of the same sound. if you plan on repeating your set theme then think about changing it in different variations. not to bad though. keep it up.
Yeah I kind of did go overboard with the repetition on this one, its more of a decorated loop than a song I suppose!
Anyway thank you very much for the review, even though I'm thanking you a few months on!