Arrangement...and maybe some volumes?
The leads not too bad...(though personally I don't like to see supersaw's in trance). This might fit a more Techno genre, but that's totally irrelevant.
So the melody's pretty good, I like how you dance around the notes a bit, rather than stick to the typical scales.
My main problem would be that the piece lacks variation. It's fairly monotone the whole way, and doesn't really have a destination to go to. In trance, silence is very important, and then a really full breakdown, which I'm afraid you don't have either.
To get a fuller flavour in breakdowns, try putting in some pads spewing nice, wide chords, sidechained to the kick drum, which brings me to my second problem:
The kick is too loud and too compressed. Also, it gets really boring, because it persists the whole way through! Compression should only be applied to the final piece, over-compressing tires ears, and kicks shouldn't be too loud anyways.
Not bad ideas, but when it gets down to it...needs some levels adjustments, and a different arrangement.
Meant purely as constructive crit., and please take it well!
Thanks a lot, I fairly new to this. Like I've only been messing with this program for like a total of maybe 72 hours ... still a lot to learn . Thanks for your comments though, helps me improve.