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[LY] Sore Lips

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Well, this is a significantly better mixed version of an older track of mine. Enjoy. :3

Reviews appreciated!
~ La_Yinn, --'

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Nice...

Well, this track sounds like a track from the game "Killing Floor" in the Halloween level. I like this track. ô.ô I would like more tracks like this.

la-yinn responds:

I love Killing Floor! Though I'm not familiar with that level I think.. I usually stick to Farm, Monastery, ArcadeShoppingCenter, Arcadev4 and Cathedral. I'm fine with my usual levels and my trusty shotgun and katana. :3

Thanks for reviewing!

Not bad at all, but its simple

Dont get me wrong it is a Nice bit of music to listen to but at least to me it seems way to simple.

Not really sure how to describe what I mean so I Hope you get it but it needs to be more complex, more stimulation just in general more going on.

Other then that nice song =)

la-yinn responds:

Hmm... well I don't think that this track is that simple at all really... I'm not one of those SFX heavy kind of producers. It can create astonashing effects but I'm not comfortable with such kinds of sequencing (yet).

I do have some ideas on how to add a few things to this particular track though, might give them a try sometime. :)

Thanks for the review!

yes

yes 1rab IS trolling everyone's songs, this is the highest score he's given anyone. Everyone mark "abusive" for his comments.

Otherwise, good song and don't ever give up this passion of yours :)

la-yinn responds:

Yeah, it's slightly saddening to see badly argumented reviews sometimes, but I really don't care so much, dw about it. :-)

I've been stuck in a bit of a not-so-musical rut lately. Hoping that this year'll go different. Thanks for the encouraging words!

Excellente Senor

I think this 1Rab guy's going around and trolling the fuck outta artist and reviewers! :P

Anyways, good track, lots of moving parts, but they all worked together.
Although that beginning bass "wub" could use some toning down, and bring out the background ambient-style music.

Otherwise very good :D

la-yinn responds:

Gracias Palden ;)

I actually thought the wobs were pretty good in there, though I have to say that if I listen to it now.. I mixed in the sounds pretty well but I think the strings aren't vivid enough, the wobs not crunchy enough and the bass at the drop is lacking subbass. I also have this bassline just STUCK in my head at the first, lighter drop that I just can't get in there...

This track is getting revamped in the future for sure, but likely later in 2011. Thanks for reviewing! :-)

hmph

its alright i guess. kinda boring and weird sounding... I feel like it can be shortened into a 15 second loop though since so little is going on.

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la-yinn
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4.35 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 25, 2010
6:43 AM EST
Genre
Drum N Bass
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3.6 MB
2 min 38 sec

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