It's okay but it didn't feel it. Try to slow it down a bit more and the lyrics I really couldn't understand. Just keep it simple.
you have to remember it is death metal, unlike my other track. i am always partial to metal however, if you've ever heard of hackneyed or devildriver youd know what i mean. other then that i agree with you, i should try and keep it simple. i really wanted to see how far i could push it with complicated riff and timing.
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