hmmm, not as good
hmmm, this one needs some work. It sounds like you made a funky dissonant clashing jam and just added it up with other instruments without considering the actual movement of the song. It doesn't really seem to move. the heavy beat will change a little, but stays clunky and random. With this, i'd put some more backround help. strings and some sort of bassline to keep the notes connected. sorry if this seems harsh, it's really just constructive, i know you've got the goods in yah, just spend a few more hours next time. peace.
hey crud!! Thanks alot for reviewing all my songs and giving me tips. ill keep checking in on you to see if you get new ones. See ya!
This song does have a good beat and is original, but it was a bit too simple for my taste.
Hey Corundum. Yes as this only being my first song it is pretty simple. Too simple. I tried to make other loops but nothing i made flowed with it. Thanks for reviewing and check my other songs!