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The Voices in my Head [Jxl180]

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Feb 23, 2010 | 6:54 PM EST
File Info
6.4 MB
2 min 49 sec
4.17 / 5.00

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Rated 4.17 / 5 stars
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1,210 Plays | 45 Downloads
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Electronic - House

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EDIT: Really? 2 votes = it that bad?



Rated 4 / 5 stars

Quiet, impressive house

I think that the way that this piece sounds, it really does leave a decent impression, especially with the way that the vocal samples blend in nicely at the start. Perhaps consider having the vocals lead into the next piece, as this is something that House artists seem averse to, so they could benefit from.

I like the beat and the melody of this piece, as there is enough variation there to keep the piece working along with a relatively short time frame that you've worked to. I might have been convinced to use a more powerful beat, but with the way that the track shapes up, you've done a decent job there.

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jxl180 responds:

Thank you for your positive review. Much appreciated.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

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The first time that I listened to this I thought it was mediocre and that it really wasn't too good or exciting. Then I read some of the other reviews that said there were vocals in it and I had never heard them the first time. I had to turn my computer way up to hear them and that's not good. Make them louder and this song would be much better!

I'll admit turning it up and listening to it a second time through was much better than rushing into a vote or a review after the first one, but like another person said make the vocals stick out more and use them to your advantage.

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jxl180 responds:

Well, I made the song as I heard it through my speakers and that could have been my first problem. Only testing it through my speakers and my iPod. To me, I didn't need the speakers loud at all to hear the vocals. Actually, they can be barely on, and as long as I hear the beat, I can hear the vocals.

Thank you for your review, and I'll see what it sounds like louder now.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Here we go!

Drums, first of all were unique, they had an essence of creepy to them which I loved.
The intro was cool but I do feel the voices could have been louder.
The main synth is pretty good, The way that you incorporated it with everything, I think was quite hard to do.
Effects were aweseome, they sounded very good.
Don't worry, the song isn't that bad, It's just a little a little repetive and loss of structure.

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jxl180 responds:

This is the second time I've heard that the vocals could be louder. I will see how they come out with them just a little louder.


Rated 4 / 5 stars


It's a nice house song, it's very cool... Everything fits so well here, andf fthe beaft is perfect together w/ the drums beat, it gives a special touch, w/out it, the music would be bad...

I think you could make 2 more minutes, because it's too short, i liked it tough, but i know you could make more minutes w/out repetitions...

Anyawys, the music is very cool, I loved it, but the only bad is the lenght, is too short...
Make more, I'll wait it!!

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jxl180 responds:

I'll see what I can do. Thank you for taking the time to review!


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Good song, but the vocals shoulb be more present

The atmosphere created by the instruments is pretty good. Actually quite relaxing (but I think I can relax to almost any tune ^^).

Anyway, I think you should try to concentrate more on the voices. After all, the song is called "voices in my head", so I think they should be more noticeable. But on the other hand you have to be careful not to overpower the music too much. It's a bit of a tightrope walk, but in my opinion it wouldn't hurt the song if the vocals would be more present in the song.

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jxl180 responds:

Thank you for your review. As I said in previous reviews, I will try this when I have a chance.

As always, thank you for taking the time to review.