Well...you're probably just starting out with your music program.
I suggest adding percussion to the song, adding interesting melodies, and better synths.
There's not much to your track, so I can't really criticize much other than the fact that it's missing substance.
You'll get better with practice, take care :)
thanks. i am just getting used to fruity loops. i have only had it for 2 weeks. i will try to make it better