Hmm, it's an interesting niche market that you're aiming for, but what the hey, you've made a pretty good sounding piece. Perhaps too good for a use like you were suggesting.
I think that a little shorter, perhaps 30s or so would be better for that - we already know that you've pretty good when it comes to looping the tracks, so keep up that work and it will give you something to work with nicely.
Perhaps just the higher pitched synths should eb a track in their own right?
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This was like a musical orgy to my ears. Just the back and forth from the left headset to the right headset made my head bounce. It was very cool and spacey sounding with headphones on.
This would be a very good pause menu musical piece. It would also be great for just the gameplay itself. It has a lot of variety and sounds great. Even though it's really short it loops perfectly meaning that it would be good for a game that would have it played over and over again. Good work.
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Too good to be in a pause screen, it's also too upbeat and melodic.
The build-up for a pause-screen failed, but it's a great loop, you should turn this into a song, add some more bass and percussion and DONT USE PRESETS DAMMIT, the thing you definitely shouldnt say in the author's comments is that You used presets.
Overall, very good, Definitely will be used in flash!
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haha, you wouldnt have even known that I used them unless I told you.
Given the shortness of this I'm finding myself without much to say, and with even less to criticise. Which is somewhat annoying for me trying to give a review, but is a good thing overall. xD
The main synth has a nice warm sound to it, and has a pretty cool evolution. The echo-y background sounds that come in help add that extra bit of colour and variety so the synth itself doesn't get repetitive. The synth that comes in at around 0:28 is also nice; it feels slightly out of tune, but for some reason that adds to the effect. The drums, once they come in, are introduced nicely and have a good beat to them.
Levels are spot on, good EQ's, the transitions work really well and all the synths are nicely picked. As has been said, the drums could have done with coming in just a little earlier, and/or the loop could have been a little longer to give the melodies a little more time to develop, but all in all this piece does everything the title suggests it to; work well as a potential title screen. Nice loop.
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This was pretty good. The atmosphere and synths in this live up to the title.
I would have liked this more if it had been a bit faster and a bit more upbeat, and if the drums had come in a bit earlier.
This really would be great pause screen/menu music. I'm sure someone will use it in their flash.
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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.