I like alot about this song but it was lacking in effects like reverb and there wasnt much of an outro. I love your work with the drums but you should concentrate on buildups and playing alot of instruments at the same time not all with the same rythmic pattern will make your songs feel alot more "populated". Still, you seem to have alot of potential so i'm going to stay tuned!
cool beans man, thanks for the input. i actually made this song because the power went out and i was watching the goddamn olympics when it did. so i broke out my laptop :P
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.