Haunting melody. The choral parts around 0:47 were tonally interesting, and perhaps could have been a bit louder.
Be careful using only sporadic percussion as a filler, like around 1:20. Perhaps a tastefully placed drone or crescendo would work there, but it seems that a good portion of the intensity had leaked away during those empty bars.
Overall, I liked it. Keep up the good work!
Thanks. I know the track is lacking in some areas. I agree that a crescendo around 1:20 would fit well. I may add it.