Lol. At the beginning I was so ready to hear the "Back to the future" theme.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4zSw2V _vW0Y <- That one!
But it never came haha. *no suprise there*
But this is really actually really good. I don't know if it's me and my attitude towards loudness, or if it's something else.. But in my opinion the first part of this song seems a wee bit loud :3 Loudness can be good, but in this case I don't know.
The part that I whole heartedly ADORE, is at 1:41! That's so damn nice right there. I got such a "age of empires" feeling right then and there.
Overall, this is a really good track man. I'm glad that you're interested in orchestral music! ;)
It's the best kind of music me thinks :)
Hey, thanks for reviewing back! Haven't received a review for a while so I appreciate you doing so.
"Lol. At the beginning I was so ready to hear the "Back to the future" theme.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4zSw2V _vW0Y <- That one!
But it never came haha. *no suprise there*"
Haha lol, it does sound a lot like the first part of it xD.
"But this is really actually really good. I don't know if it's me and my attitude towards loudness, or if it's something else.. But in my opinion the first part of this song seems a wee bit loud :3 Loudness can be good, but in this case I don't know."
Probably my obsession to loudness. I'm more of a 'volume first, questions later' type of artist :P.
"The part that I whole heartedly ADORE, is at 1:41! That's so damn nice right there. I got such a "age of empires" feeling right then and there."
Yeah, definitely my favourite part of the song too.
"Overall, this is a really good track man. I'm glad that you're interested in orchestral music! ;)
It's the best kind of music me thinks :)"
Couldn't agree more. Thanks for the great review!
another epic song
Alright thanks! I worked hard on this one, so I'm not as surprised as I was in the last one xP.
firstly, its not #100, im still on 98, but one of your songs will get it
Intro was slow, strong, and impressive, gave great contrast to the coming melody, which started with a nice Crescendo and moved quickly
Second part of melody was nice, and the flute coming in was a good touch, before going back to the low brass.
The closing to the first half of the song was interesting, for lack of a better word, but also successful
Second intro was nice, and following melody a beautiful break from the early melody with a pleasant little ditty. Really enjoyed the (hapr/xylophone/piano, can't really tell) combination, then supported by low brass
Closing melody brings the song back to familiar ground, also strong, very nice ritardando at the end.
Ending: Weak, at best. It was a good orchestral sound, but then supplemented with a snare roll that did not belong (wrong sound type) and a wimpy cymbal crash. It the percussion parts at the end needed a bit more feeling to them.
While thinking about the last part, i started really listening to the drums, and they are great through the whole song, apart from the end. They gave a strong beat, sounded nice (kinda like marching feet at some parts)
>-godieinahole zero bombers-<
Wow, thanks for the review man! You ruined my perfect 10 score, but still, I prefer a helpful review like this rather than 10 all the time, so thanks a lot! :D.
The intro is just like Chariots of Fire xD. I didn't have it in mind when I made the song, but once I heard the intro, "Chariots of Fire" immediately came to me. Good thing it totally changes after that.
Glad you liked the closing. I think making buildups is easier than building down, so glad that my proper build down came out right xD.
Heh, that's a harp :). It isn't supported by low brass, but you were close. It's supported by a bassoon xD. I'm happy that you liked the harp part, I think it's thanks to Kirbyfemur that I decided to add it ^^.
Ritardandos ftw! :D.
As for the ending, you really have a good ear. The snare roll was a totally different wav file, not from East/West (the VST I used), and so was the cymbal crash. I didn't use the East/West drums because of a really long story which I don't feel like mentioning, but let's just say if I tried to add East/West drums, it would've taken me another 20 minutes or so to do this, but now that you mentioned it, the drum samples I used for the ending are unsuitable. Don't worry, East/West has a crash cymbal that will blow your head off >:D.
Anyway, thanks again for such a supportive and helpful review!
Having listened to it all the way through, I'll say a preface: This is really cool. It's got a lot of nice changes in instrumentation, and the development of the melody throughout is in general very well done. Bit by bit, here's some things I wanted to point out:
The silence at 0:16 seems to abrupt. The start before it is nice and majestic and gives you the idea that it was worth clicking onto this song, but the way everything cuts out just for that brief moment, even though everything starts coming back in almost instantly at 0:17, felt a little excessive.
That being said, the next 20 seconds I really enjoyed. Good buildup from the 0:23 mark, the brass melody's nicely done.
I loved the chord change at 0:45 but was a little skeptical of the one at 0:49. But as it and the main themes kept going, it grew on me a lot more. And now I can't get it out of my head. Which is both awesome and mildly irritating as I keep wanting to stop typing so I can hear it again.
The flute at 0:55 has a really nice sound, and again the music goes on for its awesomeness for a long time.
1:18-1:20, the silence again is too much. It almost feels like an extra fadeout has been added into it, and it just seems out of place. It needs...anything else just so it doesn't go from this lovely thick texture to absolutely nothing and back again.
On first hearing of 1:38 where the instruments kind of trail off, I was skeptical, but when everything comes back in at 1:43, it's a really effective change of textures. The percussion, especially, is a nice touch.
The string entrance at 2:08 is wonderfully subtle, as is the brass at 2:17. Can't fault them.
The sole thing that really truly irked me about this piece was the harp glissando at 2:21. Was too loud, felt out of place, felt like you wouldn't have done the piece any harm if you'd taken it out completely. I don't know, I just didn't like it at all. TO be somewhat ranting about it.
I like the slowdown at the end, but again..the final chord seems a little off. Like it needs an extra bit of cadence just to bring the piece to a good halting place.
In all, this is a cool piece. There's a few things that maybe could use a second look, but in general it's verifiably awesome.
And yes, 0-bombers are a ridiculous pain. But judging by this, they're probably just jealous.
Holy crap, man, awesome review! Thanks! You've been extremely helpful!
0:16 and 1:18... I see what you mean. Maybe something to fill up the silence would be some strings playing in the background, or I could just start the buildup earlier.
Glad you liked the melodies, I wasn't too sure about them but it's cool that they have some good response ^^.
Yeah, I really like conga percussion, and I always try and make it as good as possible.
As for the harp glissando, I was extremely unsure about it. It adds a bit of originality to the piece, but as you said it felt completely out of place, so yes, I agree with you entirely on that.
I'll see what I can do about that ending, then ^^.
Anyway, thanks for the awesome review man, you've been so helpful. I think it's safe to say that this is the most helpful review I've ever been given on NG, and I'm glad you took the time to review it in such wonderful depth. Thanks a lot for the review, glad you enjoyed the song!
it acually does not sound like Chariots of Fire.
i acually thought it was a fighting theme until i heard the clarinet and flute part (sounded like a part fleeing from the battle.)
if this was put into a flash i would be epic not really 100% though
mabie....... OVAR 9,000!
it will surly get more popular over time.
hope you get to the best of the week.
Haha, thanks for the supportive review, man! Only the intro sounded like Chariots of Fire, but then it completely changes, yeah xP. I doubt it'll get a top 5 with all the 0-bombers but it's doing pretty well at 4.93 with 8 votes right now. Lets see how far it goes, lol :P. Thanks again for the review, man!
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