Has alot of potential
This song has alot off-pitch riffs used, but it's something I can see alot of potential out of. *gets menacing ideas :P*
AIM me the .fla to this, feel like trying something. btw, you've got some mixing ability there, you should consider looking around sites like www.sonicfoundry.com for some tracks, I have about a gig of tracks on my PC I'm willing to share with anyone. Drop me an AIM IM and I can send you some!