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Distant Dreams- OMEGA

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Final version! Should I continue this style? Review Please! Copyright '05 Patrick Mara


Captivating. I was totally engrossed by the start.

Simply captivating. Though I am rather disappointed you didn't carry on the cinematic beginning music onto the rest of the song. Nevertheless, simply great.

Well Damn..

I didn't even noticed you had The final version out when i reviewed the demo. the demo got a ten and this is perfect. Again, Love the melody and drums and everything. Keep it up and check mine out please.

Kilkila responds:

I definitely will, dude. Thanks for the reviews! I appreciate it a lot!!

ah, a trance artist ;)

hey man! thanks for your review on my review on Chaoz Devotion...

I used to make trance all the time, but i wanted to try DNB, its much harder faster.
I still write trance music for CDs that i sell and whatnot.

anyways, to the song.

Im hearing a very lisght amount of ODing in the basskciks when you break the beat in.
And im sorry, but im gonna have to say this...
go to a sample site, and get some free drumloops, and slice THEM.
Please dont use Drill_NB...i honestly got sick of it...ive been using FL for the past 3 and a half yearrs and it jsut drives me nuts.
Other than that, good song.
Ill sum up what i think of it, where you could improve...etc.

Could be more diverse.
And when i say diverse, i dont mean 'one solid melody'. I mean Proably 10 or 20 melodies! You should ahve about 20 patterns used up on FL jsut for the melody!
Me likes diveristy.

The drums were good, but get a better clap sample and some drum loops.

The simplicity of this song is amazing...its so simple. But i like the way you transformed synths, and made simple chord structure sound good.

Now you need to master a bit...

Turn down the master volume a couple notches above the middle.
Then turn down all your instruments until you never see the volume bar EVER turn red.
Keep it blue.
Then go to your master FX channel, and put on a 'fruity compressor'
Keep clicking in the presets of it until you find something that wont make the song clip with what it is.

then you should ahve an amazing song.

I sense so much potential in you it isnt even funny.
I jsut chose to review this song cause its your most popular one :P

In no time at all, i can see you becoming the next biggest hit on newgrounds.
All you need is practice.

Great job, man!


Kilkila responds:

Thanks Man! You flatter me. Personally I appreciate the negative feedback on the drum loopsz- masochistic I know but it definitely helps a lot more in the long run. The simplicity was intentional. I definitely need to work with the drums... Anyways, thanks so much for the review! I'll be in touch.


hey hey hey you mofo

i love how everything fits together
truely the best track you have made so far
Not That your other tracks arent awsome
okok, im not a dj, im a club and bar owner, not to mention a party and rave organiser
so i was woundering if you would like to send me some tunes at my email so i can see what u are made of... maybe you will get a job... with some $$$

anyways, ill ttyl
my email is parkometre_12@hotmail.com
or faraway_13@hotmail.com
keep it real man

Kilkila responds:

Workin on those tunes dude... Keep in touch!

I love it

very nice man makes me think when i was buzzed up in a party very niiice!!! GJ

Kilkila responds:

Ummmm.... ok, that was not the point of the song, but still... Glad you enjoyed it!

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Credits & Info


4.08 / 5.00

Aug 28, 2005
11:56 AM EDT
File Info
3.3 MB
3 min 34 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.