Pretty interesting song haha, nothing to say about the writing as its obvious you're still just starting out or maybe this genre is new to you.
Its definitely not horrible, and its slightly catchy at times man! Keep at it man, dont ever stop. Music is awesome.
Lots of work needs to be done in the EQ of your stuff, and theres a lot of dissonance on the piano at times. But, regardless keep at it.
Id appreciate it if you review my new song