exactly

it is really great for your first submission, it is the same beat through the whole song, i appretiate this song as i do with all your music submissions
u really pulled me into it there,
but the beat could have been
different!

nice try

i agree with the guy below me. good job though for your 1st submission! ive heard some of your other music and its much better.

Too repetitive.

The beat stays the same throughout the entire song. Try making the percussion roll through one transition at least. Or flip the beat through one transition. Also, the string accompaniment was good, but towards the end, got way too predictable and boring. You could always switch the transition from low to high into high to low or something to that effect, or shift it down two whole steps or down a key. Good job though.