This is great. I can't wait for all this to run with Phosphera, it will be one of the best soundtracks ever, you just gotta get your symphony rented. It will be epic!
Saciel is one seriously badass guy too! Ok, well make sure to change the genre to ambient, because although this puts me in a trance, it isn't trance, lol.
10 for writing, really an 8 for the submission. But only because FL studio demo has shit samples. lol You can keep your 10.
Things to work on =).
I'd say this is more ambient then trance as far as type of music goes. Hell or even misc, still yet the song in itself needs some volume checks. Some of your instruments are way to loud. You got some good concepts going here and I could really see it working rather well if everything wasn't meshing together due to lack of volume change. None the less buddy keep it up! A lil more love and who knows what will come out next.
You wanted a review.
So I'll give you a review and I'll try to be as positive as possible.
It was an OK song, but your instruments were very limited.
Your notes were well-chosen and well-placed.
The echo in your windchime-sounding instrument was attention grabbing in a very ominous way. Not a bad thing.
The ending looping to the beginning sounded like a transition to a quiet ending, which would have been a good thing, but it also sounds about a half of a quarter of a second out of place, so even that throws you off a little.
So a 4/5 and a 7/10 - a D (which isn't bad considering I go from A to K).
A mostly positive review :)